In his essay collection The Half-Known World, Robert Boswell makes a case for uncertainty as fiction’s most fertile territory. The best stories, he argues, don’t arrive fully understood by their authors. They’re discovered in the writing — and that uncertainty creates the energy that makes them live.
This applies not just to the author’s process but to the characters themselves.
Characters Who Don’t Know What’s Happening
Some of the most powerful scenes in fiction feature characters who are confused — not because the author wants to confuse the reader, but because genuine incomprehension is human. We rarely understand the full meaning of what we’re living through while we’re living through it.
A character in the middle of grief doesn’t know she’s in the middle of grief. She just knows she can’t open the curtains. A character falling in love doesn’t know that’s what’s happening. He just knows this person makes him want to be in the same room.
The reader — positioned slightly outside the character — can see what the character can’t. This gap creates dramatic irony, tenderness, and recognition. I’ve been exactly there, the reader thinks. I just didn’t know what to call it either.
Ambiguity as Depth
Resist the urge to explain everything. The most powerful endings leave something unresolved — not because the author ran out of ideas, but because life rarely provides clean conclusions. Readers who have to work to interpret a story tend to remember it longer.
This doesn’t mean obscuring your narrative. It means trusting readers to carry ambiguity without being baffled by it.
Your Drill
Write a scene where the character doesn’t fully understand what’s happening — emotionally, situationally, or both. Let the reader sense what the character cannot. Build the tension of the unsaid. Keep it under 500 words, and resist the urge to explain at the end.
Written by
Redaksi Bacalah
Content Team — Bacalah